What makes a
human a human? Intelligence? Two legs? What separates us from animals and
plants? I believe that the answer lies in a combination of various
characteristics, rather than just one single characteristic that defines all of
humanity. People are complicated and it will probably take more than just one
characteristic to completely represent the entire human race. For example, a
few traits that I think are important are our creations and our capability to
do other things in life to become more advanced than other creatures. Being
able to have imagination, to wonder, and to love and feel, plays a key part in
one’s daily life style as well. Generally speaking, there is no singular
definition of a human being.
One
definitive trait of a person is living. Excluding domesticated animals, most
living creatures' only goal in their lives is to get food to survive long
enough to reproduce. Although we started out like that, humans have moved on to
greater things. While some are accidents, people may choose to reproduce to
feel the emotions and rewards of having a child or two, instead of just
guaranteeing our survival population-wise. We lived past the point where the
only goal was to survive and have formed civilizations, governments, science,
and so much more. We have education and medicine and have done things marking
us "better" than other animals, going beyond just trying to acquire
the basic needs to survive. Humans have the power of choice, of free will,
rather than being caged constantly on the goal of receiving enough food or
fleeing from predators. We have proven to be unique in the sense of freedom of
choice.
The
second characteristic is our ability to create and imagine. Creating objects by
putting several different materials together plays a big part in advancing
human civilizations across the world. Cities and buildings and other structures
have been constructed all over the world by humans and have been unique to
humanity. Art, music, culture, philosophy, and other things have all been
created by someone’s inspiration to do great things. While other animals may
have built things, their constructs have not been nearly as complex or detailed
as humans. Cars, phones, computers, and other forms of technology have all been
a result of advancements and achievements in science and research. These
advancements and breakthroughs may have helped improve society through
imagining. People are able to create buildings and ideas through imagination.
It gives people the ability to come up with ideas and invent new ways to
improve conditions of living for people. It plays the role of a catalyst for
people to invent and create things beneficial towards their interests.
Predictions are based on imagining what will happen next or what will the next
move be, which could be a turning point in war or in a competitive activity
such as sports. Religion has part of its origins from a group of curious people
wondering where had they come from and they had used their imagination to come
up with a extensive explanation that ended up in having a large part of the
population believing in it. Our imaginative nature allows us to wonder where
our origins are from, as it also allows us to come up with different
philosophies and life styles. In the end, our innovation and imagination have a
large role in the development of human society.
Love
determines how a person treats other people around them. It is a very important emotion of the
human nature. While there is definitely love between animals in the wild, love,
for humans, can be expressed in so many different ways than just physical
contact. One’s affection for another would change their behavior, possibly
making them more kind or cruel and may change the way they think or act. It
also opens the door for many other emotions such as sadness and pain. Losing a
loved one is painful and could very easily damage someone who is close to that
person. It may take time to recover, and sometimes people never do. Sadness is
never pleasant. There is an opposite of everything in the universe, and in this
case, the opposite is hate. Love and hate go together and can easily be
interchanged very quickly. Part of love is based on trust, and if that trust is
violated and broken, a person could learn to hate someone close to them just as
much as they loved them, and can even learn to do both at the same time. Love
makes someone capable of doing great things, as hate makes one capable of evil.
Love branches out toward a variety of things, including illness. There is a
disease by the name of Heart Broken Syndrome that has been officially
recognized by many doctors as a legitimate illness. The act of losing something
may be more irritating and painful than what it is actually worth, that some
people find it very difficult and frustrating to cope with. It may drive people
toward insanity unless they find something else to distract themselves with
until the solution of the problem is presented.
The
human race has advanced forward over the ages. We survived for a long time,
though not as long as others. With time, creatures are supposedly inclined to
move forward. Yet the human race managed to develop farther than any other
creature, making progress in technology, science, literature, and much more.
What defines a person cannot be kept to a single word. People are open ended
and should not have to be required to be kept in a tiny box of classification.
Identifying humans is not simple, whether it is good or bad, smart or dumb, or
otherwise, but I believe everyone should have a choice to decide on their
personality, and that makes them who they are. The fact that people have this
choice makes them human, which also means they are not perfect and are prone to
make mistakes early on in their life.
OK you bring up some good ideas and I can see your points...And you are right, "identifying humans is not simple," which is one of the main reasons we wrote this assignment. But what I notice here which I would want to work on is that some of your paragraphs START on one topic and then FINISH somewhere else. This happens a couple of times, and it makes things feel kind of unfocused.
ReplyDeleteCheck out in particular the 2nd and 4th paragraphs. Paragraph 2 starts out about transcending just the need for survival and ends about "freedom of choice." This seems like quite a drift to me.
And Paragraph 4 starts out about love, and ENDS there, but loses focus on how this makes us human. See what I mean?
So overall I feel like there are lots of good points in here but there are a few times when you lose focus.